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[侠骨柔情] 【一匹种马闯江湖】(1-6)作者:不详

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楼上诸狼友们要失望了,作者写到如此长度已经很不容易了,再写下去很难很难了,估计这位大大已经从良了。
写这种多方位架构的书很难。开始容易写得很起劲,可人物多了一碰面就完了,自己打自己的耳光。书看多了小弟也想当作者,写了点就发现我是准备把读者当傻瓜了,写个把字的评论和写小说根本不是一回事。
古典名著水浒传之所以精彩就在于每个段落衔接的天衣无缝,金庸大大开始也做不好这点。如果你读他当初连载在明报上的大作版本时,也会发现有些一团雾水,后来出版全套武侠书时修改不少才成为名著的。
还是楼上的兄弟说得好,能写出来就是好!
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